Commenting

L.I. to comment on peoples work.
Today i am commenting on my friend joshua
 he did his Persuasive writing on brick rigs
 an Persuasive writing our writing we are doing

Commenting

L.I. to comment on other peoples work.                              Today i am commenting on my best friend
                                                                                             David he went to MOTAT for a school trip. 
                                                                                              To learn about electronics and to be smarter.

commenting

L.I. to make a smart comment
 today i commented on alayahs reading blog post. I commented on hers because i didnt do the same blog post as her.